Still working on the revisions. I'm up to page 270. Also, I've changed the title. Still not a great title, but at least it captures the theme of the story. For now, until all 1 or 2 of you come up with something better, I'm calling it "VENGEANCE AND VINDICATION." The story is a lot about revenge and forgiveness.
Do you like it? If not can you come up with something better. I'm open.